*petpetpets* It's hard, isn't it? But, hey, useful to know when you are about to start new stories!

If I were to pick one thing that occasionally tweaks me about your writing it's that you can sometimes be very passive in places where an active voice would be more powerful. As a result, some scenes that should feel tense end up a bit distant.

Now that wasn't so bad, was it?

Also... >_> <_< *yoink!*

Stupid format!

*yoinks meme*

No, it wasn't so bad. *tells muses to take notes*

I'll work hard! OH~~! *pumps fist in the air* XD

Thank you.

~BA

Hmmm~~ *thinks hard* Some how i could only come up with "TO BE CONTINUED..." at the bottom of your chapters. -sighs- If only it could go on forever! <3

Sorry i couldn't find a fork to fork you with, but i really do adore your style.

*laughs!* A fic that goes on forever and ever? Eek! *fears for poor typing fingers* Well, ^_~ I'll see what I can do then. *flexes finger muscles*

XD!!! Thank you.

~BA

I've really only got one nit-pick: in spoken conversation, people tend to use the pluperfect tense (had gone, had said) very rarely. This: "Che, Uchiha had always been full of himself that way" sounds a little awkward if you're imagining that someone's saying it.

'Uchiha has always been full of himself' or 'Uchiha always was full of himself' sounds a bit more natural.

Your style's great, and I can't say anything else. Keep on rockin'.

Yikes! What a mess! XD How did that happen?

Thanks so much! And will keep that in mind. :)

~BA

Not to be a dork or anything, but.... I read alot and I gotta say I seriously love the way you express yourself in writing. You have a very complete figurative way of explaining things and I find that totally gravitating. ^_^

m(_ _)m Thank you.

I wish I could sound smart and point something out but, as we all know already, your writing style is near perfect and I can't point anything out that annoys me except for the first comment you got. Anything else... is perfect, especially your lemons. I've come to think of you as a Goddess (yeah I know, I'm a freak...shut up T__T).

Thank you. =^-^= I don't know bout near perfect XD but thank you just the same.

~BA

*just loves becca's stories to see anything wrong*

BUT OMG, THIS IS OUT OF TOPIC BUT SOME IDIOT IS PLAGIARISING YOUR WORK!!!!!!! X/

*laughs!* Well then, maybe they want to finish sf for me XD

*shakes head* That's utterly ridiculous. Thank you so much for bringing this to my attention. ^_^

and thank you most of all for liking my work.

~BA