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11 April 2006 @ 07:49 pm
Fic: 1:Comfort  
Wow, you mean I haven't updated this thing since last year? *shame* Well back in December I had asked for words/phrases/sentences for inspiration. So far I've only completed one of the list given to me.

I'm not sure where this is going, or where it came from. XD I may continue it by using one of the other words/phrases/sentence from the list. Who knows. *shrugs* Well it's been a while since I've written anything,I hope you enjoy. ^_^

Title: 01:Comfort (Word provided by [info]kittychan86)
Author: BeccaAmon
Genre: AU
Pairings: Sasuke&Naruto
Disclaimer: Standard disclaimers apply.
AN: Unbeta-ed


Comfort


Naruto brought the cool, linen sleeve to his nose, the scent unbinding him inside and out. And just then the morning breeze entered the open glass doors, and he felt like relaxed strips of fabrics in the wind. He brought his bare legs up to his chest, the long hem of the work shirt slipping in-between his thighs. Resting his arms on his knees, he turned back to watch the sleeping figure on the hotel bed. Dark hair peeked out from among the layers of white, naked skin aglow in the morning sun.

Rising from his spot, he took careful steps to the peaceful sleeper. The long hem of the work shirt softly brushed against his thigh, a feeling that made him smile. Sasuke's office I.D still hung on a shirt pocket, a stern and serious face gracing the rectangular strip of plastic.

Lowering himself onto the mattress as carefully as he could, he hovered above the handsome, young man below. He drew close enough that his breath stirred dark bangs, close enough that his lips warmed at the sudden desire to kiss those sleeping lips.

After a moment, Sasuke's arms snaked around his waist and brought their bodies to press against the other. Naruto allowed it, just as Sasuke had allowed him to watch him as he pretended to sleep. Sasuke's lips brushed his once, and twice, and the third time he caught those soft lips with his. Naruto brought his hand up to tangle in the sleek, dark hair and rocked against the body pressed to him. With his tongue, he opened Sasuke's lips, moved his jaw to meet tongues.

Sasuke made an appreciative noise, arms that encircled his waist, clenching tighter. Their bodies mimicked their lips and tongue, moving in an even and slow rhythm. Sasuke's hands moved lower to stroke Naruto's thigh, pushing the shirt's fabric up and off his heated flesh. Gasping now, Naruto raised his chin for Sasuke's lips that were making their way to his neck. He sighed as tongue, lips and teeth nipped, sucked and kissed at his skin. Tightening his grip on Sasuke's hair, his eyes fluttered close.

Sasuke sat up to switch their positions when his cell phone beeped incessantly, making them jump.

"Fuck, it's that late already?" Sasuke groaned as he reached for his cell phone to turn the alarm off.

Shutting his phone, Sasuke looked to Naruto apologetically. "I gotta go."

"Yeah," Naruto murmured; his voice husky. From his spot, he watched Sasuke gather his things--pants, watch, socks, and a fresh shirt--and made his way to the bathroom. The shower was brief, he couldn't join Sasuke, even though it would please them both if he had.

Naruto watched Sasuke button his shirt, then shirt-cuffs, and tucked the shirt hem into his pants. Sasuke reached for the suit jacket draped on the couch, and lastly he reached toward Naruto. The I.D was plucked from its place, a quiet click sounded as Sasuke clipped it on his shirt.

'When will I see you again?' The question hung at the tip of his tongue, but it just hung there, and remained unsaid.

Sasuke adjusted his suit one last time, looked around just in case he forgot something, and finally reached for his briefcase.

Naruto hadn't realized he was gripping the sheets until his hand began to complain, so he quickly released it, smoothing out the creases.

A hand in his vision brought his attention back to Sasuke. The warm hand rested on his shoulder, and soft lips pressed against his lips brief and sweet.

"Bye,"

"Yeah."

Naruto stared at the door, long after he heard that tell-tale click. Shaking his head, he returned to his position in front of the open glass doors, and watched the morning traffic. A breeze passed by and lifted Sasuke's scent off the shirt. He brought the sleeve up to his nose and basked in the temporary comfort it gave.

**

List:
[info]vayshMuffin
[info]sintariBrief is life but love is long.
[info]empyreal_rainCHILDHOOD FRIENDS
[info]kittychan86comfort
[info]questofdreamscaricature
[info]clayremachiavelli
[info]dani3lrspaghetti
[info]istealboyswings
"I wish I smoked."
"Why?"
"So I would know what to do with my hands..."
[info]kasu0236
Life had always been tough as an orphan, but somehow he had
always managed to get by.
[info]dwessa
"And it hurts my mind to think of
all the stupid things I said;
and if I can change the future,
I would change the past instead"
--Danny Elfman

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Winde: Guardian[info]kittychan86 on April 11th, 2006 06:08 pm (UTC)
Uwaa~ I saw my name on my friend's list and was like O.o

I had totally forgotten about this lol. What a great little scene! I absolutely loved it, and can totally feel what Naruto feels because I've done the same thing, taken comfort from something with my love's scent on it :) I can't wait to read more of these!
Becca Amon: Sliding doors[info]spiralfall on April 11th, 2006 06:10 pm (UTC)
*snickers* I may just have something to follow this. *plots* It's...poking me. XD Thank you for the word of inspiration.
questofdreams: ot4 - naruto[info]questofdreams on April 11th, 2006 06:56 pm (UTC)
OMG, Becca!!!! lol. I just about spazzed when I checked my friends list and saw that you'd posted something. YAY!!

I have lots of questions swirling around in my head from that scene so I do hope you write more of it although if not, I loved it anyway ^^ Very bittersweet.
kae: SasuNaru-fangirlcam[info]empyreal_rain on April 11th, 2006 07:20 pm (UTC)
xd
OKIESSS... that was like OXYGEN in the blood stream~ thanks...

I like the image of Naruto in that shirt. WOW!

'When will I see you again?' The question hung at the tip of his tongue, but it just hung there, and remained unsaid.
-work buddies?
-Sasuke married and they're something something lovers?

-Naruto is a skank? -Sasuke client? <-- i like this one XD fufufufu

i loves that line... XD;; gahhh-- it tingles the mind.

*huggles Becca* Be around more. ~_~ *clings* won't let you go now! BUWAHAHAHAH!

FIRST POST OF 2006

more SASUXNARU loving coming...
[info]eeerica on April 11th, 2006 08:15 pm (UTC)
This sounds really corny, but reading that made me feel happy. ^___^ The emotions and actions in it were very believable. <3
ゆかりちゃん~: sasunaru[info]yukari_sama on April 11th, 2006 08:25 pm (UTC)
AHHH I was just randomly searching for some old smut and you updated!!! ;D though I can't help but say this chapter is such a tease. You left a lot of questions out and *points to empyreal_rain's comment* I really like the idea of the skank & client.. plot ;Pp

I've missed your writing (AND you =D) and I love that you haven't abandoned us eager readers =)
Rem Akimichi: Loser[info]istealboyswings on April 11th, 2006 11:49 pm (UTC)
OMG BECCA! It's Becca! But I think everyone knows that. I missed your writing like whoa!

This is a lovely little piece. Good job! *hearts it* I've been out of the Naruto loop for a while, but I still love reading fics for it. Yay you!
Lady: TSNinja[info]vaysh on April 12th, 2006 07:29 am (UTC)
EEE and double EEE! Awesome Beccafic AND I see I'm lucky enough to get a fic sometime in the future!

Please let me know if you want fanart or anything as a thank you!
ksadjksla: Poor Gaara[info]refusing on April 12th, 2006 01:17 pm (UTC)
Uwaa! You don't know how happy I was to see that you updated!! I <3 it!!! Great Job!
youji_yola: AWWWWWW[info]youji_yola on April 14th, 2006 05:30 pm (UTC)
You're back! T^T

Scene with Naruto watching the 'sleeping' Sasuke is so adorable, and when Naruto hovered above Sasuke's head... ♥ sounds like such a beautiful picture.

I felt kinda bad for Naruto in the end though, because it sounds like they're having a forbidden tryst, or hidden love affair.
Niss[info]nissie_chan on April 18th, 2006 02:45 pm (UTC)
Poor boys...men, whatever. They'll always be boys to me. Anyway, gah! I wish everyone could write like you! That would make reading fanfiction a whole lot more pleasurable. I think it would be great if you would write something to fit this into, but it works as a one-shot as well. A sad one-shot, but a good one.

Thanks for writing fanfiction! You make SasuNaru fangirls all over the globe glow with happiness! (I'm from the Netherlands! So I'm not kidding!)
bluddorgy[info]bluddorgy on March 24th, 2008 05:23 am (UTC)
well im from NZ so :P
this, i did'nt like!!!!
WTF i know, but this one just doesnt get me?!?!?
 
 

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